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Yesterday I thought of you by ~lzrelak:iconlzrelak:





Yesterday I thought of you
remembering the fun things
that we used to do.
I even thought of your smile
and how we used to laugh
while in each others arms,
in love all the while.

I sent you a picture,
A picture I knew you would love
The faerie princess was an image
like an angel sent from above.
Her beauty aparent in the strokes of the brush
Her lips were like yours, soft and lush.

You probably won't look at it though
because you just want to forget
I know how you feel about us
all the pain and regret.
But I need you to know that I still think of you
and all of your beauty and talent, I do.

I know I never did what was right
when it came to our relationship
I always kept you in the dark
I let die that beautiful spark
The one that we used to have when we kissed,
Oh the way we kissed is truly missed.

I just wanted to say I'm sorry
I promise it is not what I intended.
I told you the truth though
You had every right to know
I can't go back now it's true,
but I just needed you to know, I miss you.
©2002-2009 ~lzrelak
:iconlzrelak:

Author's Comments

This is a revised version of the poem I submitted yesterday...I figured I would try rewriting this one too because upon reading it again, I didn't really care for the way it came out. Comments always welcome and appreciated.

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:iconstardreamer:
you just described, in perfect detail, what i'm going through right now. amazing.
:iconopen-your-eyes:
I like this...love is topic you like to write about. :) (Smile) though it's always sad, which is understandable. I love how you can rhyme without making me want to scream my head off because of it...alot of rhyming poems are just there to rhyme, but your's actually had a point to make. :) (Smile) Good work.
:icontorn-pages:
i deeply dig this.*fav*

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